Where’s Ralphie?

Max slowly raised himself up on his elbows as the smoke cleared. The hallway stank of sulfur, urine, and fear. Broken shards of glass fell tinkling to the floor, abruptly breaking the eerie silence.

“Hey Ralphie? You okay?”

There was no answer.

 

This is a submission for the yeah write weekly writing challenge #190

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14 thoughts on “Where’s Ralphie?

  1. Fabulous scene-setting here, and such a vivid, tiny snapshot of the action. Really nice job. Great to see you here at yeah write, Sean!

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